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YOU DON’T HAVE TO BE BORN INTO ROYALTY to be treated royally… Stop throwing your money away on rent. Did you know that when you own your own home the payment is a tax deduction? Yes the government gives you a raise when you buy the house. Poor credit? No credit? Is this holding you back from your dream? Start securing your financial future today when you reward yourself with this gorgeous, executive 4 bedroom, 2 story, 1 den, 2.5 bathroom, 1962 sq. ft. living area, 7480 sq. ft. lot size, 3 car garage home. Beautiful back yard with attractive view GOLF COURSE… Fantastic neighborhood amenities await the successful family … Just take over existing payments ($4200) and the house is yours… no bank or credit qualifying … no cost no fee for transfer. Call today to jump start your future … (714)360-6357
I rewrote the adv and sent it to her. I assume that GOLT COURT means golf course, but I might be wrong… I just couldn’t stand it!!! (p.s. I didn’t try to do more than fix the punctuation, spelling and grammer…. I also got lazy toward the end.)