dang it… I will now edit my

[jstoesz]

dang it…

I will now edit my post out of embarrassment. Are there any other grammatical errors that I missed after my third proof read?

Are there improvements I can make to my thesis statement? Maybe the subject was not limited enough? Or I did not have sufficient supporting details.

After the shame of my failed grammar, I guess I will just have to rely on the old crutch…Hitler and Latin.

http://psy.otago.ac.nz/r_oshea/WFP/WFP2e/argument.html

Edit: Looks like I can not change my previous post…oh well I got 1 out of 3 right…