I read through the first 3 pages…I think that he has great information, however I don’t think he’ll get them to read past the first page. First he should be starting with explaining what he wants from them. Then very CLEAR AND CONCISE reasoning for why…this should be on one page only! I definitely don’t believe he should start with accusations (not saying they don’t deserve this), but would you read past the first page if all it was doing was accusing you? This is supposed to start opening their eyes to what’s REALLY going on and get them to listen…I just don’t feel it is the best way to go about it….
Does anyone else have any online petitions to post?
